假定你是高三学生李华，你的一位外国笔友 Dick 在英语学习中经常犯一些小错误，为此他发电子邮件给你，希望你结合自身学习经历谈谈体会。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：
1.对待犯错误的态度；
2.减少犯错误的方法；
3.你的相关经历和感受。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Dick，
I’m writing to share some ideas about mistakes. Above all,never account mistakes as something unacceptable.Just take it easy.What you should do is to learn lessons from mistakes.Under the circumstances,next time you will have fewer chances to make mistakes when you use English.
Take me for an example.Frank to you,my English learning experiences used to be filled with mistakes.And I just bought a tiny notebook which I would note down mistakes in.Moreover,every night before going to bed,I would review my notebook in order to deepen my memory.As expected,my mistakes faded away day by day!
Well,I have decreased my mistakes and I hope you can do likewise.
Yours，
Lihua
这篇文章尝试了尽可能简洁的写法，也小有成就(104)个词。
也成功应用了以下词组:
under the circumstances
account… as…
fade away
as expected
望再接再厉！
改进版22.5 原来22
Above all,never account mistakes as something unacceptable.What you should do is to gain some experience from them.Under the circumstances, you will have fewer chances to make mistakes when you use English.
Take me for an example.Frankly speaking,my English learning experiences used to be filled with mistakes.To improve the situation, I bought a tiny notebook which I would note down mistakes in.Moreover,every night before going to bed,I would review my notebook so as to deepen my memory.As expected,my mistakes faded away day by day!
Well,I have decreased my mistakes and I hope you can do likewise.
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